My Intro

Here's a copy of the intro to my whole piece. Let me know if you have suggestions!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o_TzX3itDQgTHvf8wHGZ5jB8U1M_xFo1BaThiNbmCk8/edit

I'm going to keep adding onto it, so you might see me in the middle of my writing process!